The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money adressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

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Many people argue that the
government
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is spending much
money
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to find life on other planets,
while
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where the
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should prioritize civil
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. I believe
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correct because
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seriouser
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humanitarian
issues
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, and that could result in a country
cost
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gap
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. The
government
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spending a lot of
money
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to repair
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the problem
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problem
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problems
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of
public
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more important than
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use
for
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exploring other planets.
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because,
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community
issues
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in earth life affect the survival of all beings since the age of the earth is increasing can
will
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add to the problem of some disasters, so if the
society
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hit
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by a disaster can cause extinction.
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, the occurrence of
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poverty in India has increased
as a result
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of the
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not allocating
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to fix the problem of
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society
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, and the environment be
unstable
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an unstable
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consequence of the
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such
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as
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society
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pollute
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the aquatic environment where they are not controlled.
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, the
government
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waste a lot of
money
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for finding new life on other planets which could result in a country
cost
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gap
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.
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to say, the
government
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must use
much
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money
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for buying some facilities which
has
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a
big-budget
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big budget
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, and they should spend
much
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many
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funds which
increases
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increase
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the
cost
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of
living
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the living
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gap
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, and it can make solving public problems that are not evenly distributed.
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, the
government
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in the USA
spending
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a lot of
money
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to build a space station as much as 100 billion, so it
make
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the savings of state finances reduced by 45%, and the needs of
society
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be
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unfulfilled.
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, the
government
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using
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the funds of
country
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the country
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to complete public problems which can survive longer, and they must avoid the
cost
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gap
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. Where possible, the
government
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should balance the
money
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between the main needs of
society
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and secondary
need
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.

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