The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money adressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?
Many people argue that the
government
is spending much money
to find life on other planets, while
where the government
should prioritize civil issues
. I believe that is
correct because Change preposition
of seriouser
seriouser
humanitarian Replace the word
serious
issues
, and that could result in a country cost
gap
.
The government
spending a lot of money
to repair Add an article
the problem
problem
of Fix the agreement mistake
problems
public
more important than Correct article usage
the public
it
use Change the pronoun
its
for
exploring other planets. Change preposition
to
That is
because, the
community Correct article usage
apply
issues
in earth life affect the survival of all beings since the age of the earth is increasing can will
add to the problem of some disasters, so if the Remove a modal verb
apply
society
hit
by a disaster can cause extinction. Add a missing verb
is hit
For example
, the occurrence of the
poverty in India has increased Correct article usage
apply
as a result
of the government
not allocating money
to fix the problem of the
Correct article usage
apply
society
, and the environment be unstable
consequence of the Add an article
an unstable
the unstable
issues
such
as the
Correct article usage
apply
society
pollute
the aquatic environment where they are not controlled.
Wrong verb form
polluting
Additionally
, the government
waste a lot of money
for finding new life on other planets which could result in a country cost
gap
. That is
to say, the government
must use much
Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
money
for buying some facilities which has
a Change the verb form
have
big-budget
, and they should spend Correct your spelling
big budget
much
funds which Change the quantifier
many
increases
the Change the verb form
increase
cost
of living
Add an article
the living
a living
gap
, and it can make solving public problems that are not evenly distributed. For instance
, the government
in the USA spending
a lot of Wrong verb form
spends
money
to build a space station as much as 100 billion, so it make
the savings of state finances reduced by 45%, and the needs of Change the verb form
makes
society
be
unfulfilled.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To conclude
, the government
using
the funds of Wrong verb form
uses
country
to complete public problems which can survive longer, and they must avoid the Add an article
the country
cost
gap
. Where possible, the government
should balance the money
between the main needs of society
and secondary need
.Fix the agreement mistake
needs
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