Nowadays in many countries the proportion of older population is higher that of younger people. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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people
argue that
older
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the older
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population
is most popular
that
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than
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younger
people
. The positive
impact
for the
the
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country
is lots of experience,
while
the negative
impact
is lack of power for doing some activities. The large number of elderly inhabitants in a
country
has the advantage because
lots
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of lots
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of experience in their
life
.
That is
to say, they have lived longer than young
people
, and
their
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they
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already feel many good and bad experiences
of
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in
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the
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life
. Afterwards, they could put their experiences into practice directly, and it can be more productive.
For example
, In Japan
have
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a
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the
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lot of average
population
is older as much
35,38
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as 35,38
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people
which makes them develop faster in economic fields.
Therefore
, if the
country
have
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many elderly
of
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inhabitants could give
positive
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a positive
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impact
in
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on
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the
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life
.
On the other hand
, the negative influence of
population
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the population
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of parents in a
country
is
lack
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the lack
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of power for doing some
occupation
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occupations
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.
That is
to say, if
the
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people
as
their
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get older their physical strength will decrease. What
is
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are
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results
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the results
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?
,
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when
their
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people
do
activity
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an activity
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can feel more tired from their
physical
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physically
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or
their
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in their
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mind.
For instance
, In Indonesia have many old residents than younger
people
which
make
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makes
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the
country
longer
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a longer
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time to solve a problem
such
as providing assistance to others
takes
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longer and the results of the problem are not effective in the
issue
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country
.
To sum up
, there are some positive
impact
and negative
impact
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impacts
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of lots of elderly
population
in the
country
like
their
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they
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have many
experience
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experiences
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in
the
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apply
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life
,
while
the issue
also
give
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gives
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negative
impact
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impacts
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like lack of power. Where possible, the
country
should balance the
population
between elderly and younger to develop
country
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the country
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of some issues for becoming better in
the
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apply
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life
.
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