Nowadays in many countries the proportion of older population is higher that of younger people. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Many
people
argue that older
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the older
population
is most popular that
younger Correct word choice
than
people
. The positive impact
for the the
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apply
country
is lots of experience, while
the negative impact
is lack of power for doing some activities.
The large number of elderly inhabitants in a country
has the advantage because lots
of experience in their Change preposition
of lots
life
. That is
to say, they have lived longer than young people
, and their
already feel many good and bad experiences Correct pronoun usage
they
of
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in
the
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apply
life
. Afterwards, they could put their experiences into practice directly, and it can be more productive. For example
, In Japan have
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apply
a
lot of average Correct article usage
the
population
is older as much 35,38
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as 35,38
people
which makes them develop faster in economic fields. Therefore
, if the country
have
many elderly Change the verb form
has
of
inhabitants could give Change preposition
apply
positive
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a positive
impact
in
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on
the
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apply
life
.
On the other hand
, the negative influence of population
of parents in a Add an article
the population
country
is lack
of power for doing some Correct article usage
the lack
occupation
. Fix the agreement mistake
occupations
That is
to say, if the
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apply
people
as their
get older their physical strength will decrease. What Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
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are
results
?Correct article usage
the results
,
when Change the punctuation
apply
their
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apply
people
do activity
can feel more tired from their Add an article
an activity
physical
or Change the word
physically
their
mind. Change preposition
in their
For instance
, In Indonesia have many old residents than younger people
which make
the Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
country
longer
time to solve a problem Correct article usage
a longer
such
as providing assistance to others takes
longer and the results of the problem are not effective in the Wrong verb form
taking
issue
Change the verb form
issuing
country
.
To sum up
, there are some positive impact
and negative impact
of lots of elderly Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
population
in the country
like their
have many Correct pronoun usage
they
experience
in Change to a plural noun
experiences
the
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apply
life
, while
the issue also
give
negative Change the verb form
gives
impact
like lack of power. Where possible, the Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
country
should balance the population
between elderly and younger to develop country
of some issues for becoming better in Add an article
the country
the
Correct article usage
apply
life
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