Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is immense ‎pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing ‎pollution. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.‎

The majority of citizens think that pollutants in towns come from the rising number of motor vehicles
whereas
others suggest that many manufacturers are the major
cause
of
waste
and
pullution
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pollution
. In
this
essay, both views will
examined
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be examined
examine
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and I will describe my opinion on
this
.
To begin
with the car user's perspective. Automobiles in towns
cause
pollution
less than
industries
. The obvious main danger is air
pullution
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pollution
. Vehicles produce toxic gases and particulate matter
such
as
PM
2.5 from engine combustion,
however
, with advanced technology these days, most latest automobiles rarely
cause
enormous
waste
to cities.
For example
, recently, electric
cars
have become popular among people because they are more advantages than petrol
cars
espectially
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especially
in the
environment
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environmental
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aspect.
It is clear that
electric
cars
emit fewer
greenhoues
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greenhouse
greenhouses
gasses and air pollutants than diesel ones.
Therefore
, the growing number of automobiles is not
the
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tremendous
cause
of
pollution
and
waste
.
In contrast
, a large amount of world
pollution
has come from
industries
since
industrial
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the industrial
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revolution. It is noticeable that different kinds of factories generate unique tonnes of hazardous
waste
.
For instance
,
industries
emit dust
such
as
PM
2.5 and PM10 which comes from incomplete combustion
while
cars
cause
only
PM
2.5.
Moreover
, there are various toxic gases
such
as
nitous
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nitrous
oxide and sulfur dioxide generated from production processes and they are combined with water and discharged into rivers.
Consequently
, many natural resources are contaminated.
To sum up
, even though both motor vehicles and
industries
emit
pollution
, I hold the view that motor
cars
do not
cause
so
much
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problems compared to industrial production.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
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  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban congestion
  • air quality
  • emission standards
  • greenhouse gases
  • carbon footprint
  • toxic emissions
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • clean technology
  • public health concerns
  • mitigation strategies
  • noise pollution
  • renewable energy
  • electric vehicles
  • industrial waste
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