Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is immense ‎pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing ‎pollution. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.‎

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The majority of citizens think that pollutants in towns come from the rising number of motor vehicles
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others suggest that many manufacturers are the major
cause
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of
waste
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and
pullution
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pollution
. In
this
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essay, both views will
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and I will describe my opinion on
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.
To begin
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with the car user's perspective. Automobiles in towns
cause
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pollution
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less than
industries
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. The obvious main danger is air
pullution
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pollution
. Vehicles produce toxic gases and particulate matter
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as
PM
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2.5 from engine combustion,
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, with advanced technology these days, most latest automobiles rarely
cause
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enormous
waste
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to cities.
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, recently, electric
cars
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have become popular among people because they are more advantages than petrol
cars
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espectially
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especially
in the
environment
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aspect.
It is clear that
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electric
cars
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emit fewer
greenhoues
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greenhouse
greenhouses
gasses and air pollutants than diesel ones.
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, the growing number of automobiles is not
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tremendous
cause
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of
pollution
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and
waste
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.
In contrast
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, a large amount of world
pollution
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has come from
industries
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since
industrial
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the industrial
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revolution. It is noticeable that different kinds of factories generate unique tonnes of hazardous
waste
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.
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,
industries
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emit dust
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as
PM
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2.5 and PM10 which comes from incomplete combustion
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cars
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cause
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only
PM
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2.5.
Moreover
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, there are various toxic gases
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as
nitous
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nitrous
oxide and sulfur dioxide generated from production processes and they are combined with water and discharged into rivers.
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, many natural resources are contaminated.
To sum up
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, even though both motor vehicles and
industries
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emit
pollution
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, I hold the view that motor
cars
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do not
cause
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so
much
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problems compared to industrial production.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban congestion
  • air quality
  • emission standards
  • greenhouse gases
  • carbon footprint
  • toxic emissions
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • clean technology
  • public health concerns
  • mitigation strategies
  • noise pollution
  • renewable energy
  • electric vehicles
  • industrial waste
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