The news media have become too much influence in people’s lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The news

media

have become too much influence in people’s lives today and

this

is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree It is believed that the progressively massive strength of the

media

is causing

terrible

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influence on an individual's life. From my perspective,

this

practice is harmful to a certain extent, thanks to overexploitation directly

impacts

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human and animal habitats. The following paragraph would shed light on my viewpoint. On the one hand, opponents of said opinion have their rational ground.

First,

the

media

makes citizens insecure in daily life. Interestingly, the

media

always delivers news about

natural

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a natural

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disaster

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disasters

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,

crime

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and crime

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, which makes individuals apprehensive. To exemplify,the covid wave is raging in countries around the world,

there

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and there

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is a significant number of false information being spread on the internet, causing interference and

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.

Second,

the

media

has the ability to manipulate psychology and human thoughts. Particularly, the

media

has the ability to show incomplete information to cause misunderstandings for the audience. In fact, when presidential elections happen, actors are invited

up

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to broadcast

about

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their votes even though they have no political expertise.

On the other hand

, the above arguments are insufficient to overshadow the shortcomings of the topic in question. The most pertinent reason is that forewarning about the potential jeopardy

to help

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everyone can protect themselves. To be specific, weather forecasts and news remind citizens to be careful with latent jeopardy. A perfect epitome

for

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this

is that the

media

warn them about natural disasters

such

as floods and storms.

In addition

, residents are able to use

media

such

as equipment to solve

society

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society's

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problems. Specifically, citizens use the

media

to voice their opinion, which gathers

attention

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the attention

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of the general public and

labor

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labour

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force. If one day the

media

ceases to exist, no one cares about an individual’s opinion. In conclusion, it is disputable that the

media

not only makes people insecure about inaccurate information but

also

manipulates the psychology of viewers.

Nonetheless

, communication helps us to avoid natural disasters and solve social problems.