Some people today believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis.Other people believe that world population is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of world's economy and society. Discuss both views and give your option.
It's a common belief that a growing birth rate may cause instability by damaging the ecosystem of the world.
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, another view highlights its importance in the form of a quality workforce. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both views.
On one hand, more people would eventually lead to more consumption of resources, Linking Words
thus
, could damage the ecosystem. It has 2 drawbacks; Linking Words
firstly
, renewable energies will be consumed completely, Linking Words
secondly
, the supply graph would not meet the demand graph. Linking Words
Therefore
, many inventions too, Linking Words
such
as vehicles, etc., which use these energies may become obsolete. Linking Words
For example
, it has become a global concern that the world may face scarcity of petrol because its deposits are very few and insufficient to meet the demand of a growing population.
On another hand, a large number of manpower means a better workforce, as companies may have more choices to hunt skilled labour. Linking Words
Moreover
, a large count of skilled employees would improve development work, more research work will be done, and Linking Words
as a result
, more inventions would result. India, Linking Words
for instance
, is a poor country where most people die because of hunger, but it has a developing economy. The reason is a large number of human resources among which skilled labour can be chosen for development work inside and outside the country.
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To conclude
, more live births have some pros and cons. It may damage the natural cycle, but, may Linking Words
also
provide a large count of skilled labours. Linking Words
Hence
, the rates can be managed efficiently to gain maximum benefits.Linking Words
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