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Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child’s education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Playing a
team
 sport can help the
overall
 development of a child in plenty of ways. Every parent must promote their child to take part in specifically these types of games. I totally, agree with the statement and will be stating some points to support my agreement.
Further
,
this
 essay will be discussing how playing in the early stages of
life
 can help children develop
interpersonal
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interpersonally
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 and better understand the different mindsets among the youth.
Firstly
, playing in a
team
 game helps an individual to develop communication
skills
. As in a sports
game
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,game
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 a
team
has
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tohas
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 follow each other's instructions and play as a single unit in order to succeed. So,
this
 could help boost confidence and deliver messages in an effective way.
For instance
, during my childhood
days
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,days
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 I use to play football, which assisted me to nurture my effective communication
skills
. Eventually,
this
 helped me a lot in my college days,
while
 I was leading a final-year college project.
Secondly
, focusing on working in a
team
 environment can prove to be beneficial in childhood days.
Consequently
, that individual can focus on other aspects of
life
.
Additionally
, children are eager to learn new things, so, they can learn these
skills
 in the early part of
life
 in a fun way.
For instance
, one of my friends use to be shy and quite reserved. Eventually,
this
 cost him trouble making new friends, just of his very nature.
Further
, it was difficult for him to make a shift in his behaviour.
To conclude
, the parent must encourage their child to take part in
team
 sports to develop basic
life
skills
 as mentioned above, which would surely help them in future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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