Write a letter to your manager for a 3-day leave to attend a training course. In your letter -what is the course about -how this course will be helpful to your work -suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Mr Smith, I'm writing to request a 3-day leave to attend a Pilates workshop in Wanning city, Hainan province from Feb 14-15. The course was conducted by the well-known instructor Sarah who is highly recognized in our industry. The 3-day course covers many aspects

such

as how to develop healthy eating habits, how to meditate, and knowledge regarding the muscular structure of the human body, which can be beneficial to my future work as an instructor at our company. Since our studio only covers classes related to Pilates itself now, I believe after the 3-day workshop I can find more information about the self-care practice industry, which may help the company to have a better understanding of the industry, so that our company can decide whether we should add other activities or courses into our current curriculum. During the period of my absence, Tina will take over my classes with my students.

Besides

, I will be reachable anytime after each day's class, which means 5 pm. I hope you can accept my requirement and look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Yan Wang

Submitted by wly_yanwang on Wed Feb 15 2023

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Write a letter to your manager for a 3-day leave to attend a training course. In your letter -what is the course about -how this course will be helpful to your work -suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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