You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear sir or mam, I am writing to inquire about accommodation options in Canada. My name is Dilpreet Kaur and I am moving to Kelowna from India

this

December

along with

my parents and younger brother for work purposes. One of my friends recommended me your company as it is considered best to find a desirable home for people. Let me explain my expectations, we are currently looking for a two-story house which will include three bedrooms with attached washrooms, a living room, a guest room and one kitchen will be more than enough. As I am fond of gardening, I would prefer to have a beautiful garden at the entrance.

Apart from

this

, if you can search for a house with a nice view of mountains or a building surrounded by the ocean, that will be icing on the cake. As all the family members own personal vehicles, commuting will not be a problem. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Dilpreet

Submitted by dilprt.kaur00 on Wed Feb 15 2023

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