People getting addicted to other region food rather than local food. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of it.
There is no denying the fact that the main impact of cultural
mosicism
is debatable. As result, Correct your spelling
mysticism
public
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the public
become
more interested in other urban Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
areas
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areas'
area's
food
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instead
of loving their traditional Linking Words
food
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will examine both views and I will show my point of view.
There are Use synonyms
people
who argue that the benefits of citizens Use synonyms
prefering
other Correct your spelling
preferring
countries
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countries'
country's
food
considerably outweigh it Use synonyms
is disadvantages
. The main reason for believing Change the verb form
is disadvantaged
this
is that consuming other Linking Words
countries
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countries'
country's
food
might be more beneficial for the public. Use synonyms
For instance
, eating Linking Words
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Indian
food
that reaches with spices and vegetables can be Use synonyms
more
healthier for Change the word
apply
the
society. To illustrate, most urban Correct article usage
apply
areas
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areas'
area's
food
contained nutrients and vitamins which could aid Use synonyms
people
to be more healthy and fit. Indeed, Use synonyms
this
makes it clear that intaking other Linking Words
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cuisines
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cuisines'
cuisine's
food
might have Use synonyms
a
tremendous well-being for Remove the article
apply
the
society.
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apply
On the other hand
, others believe that getting addicted to other Linking Words
cuisines
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food
may have certain demerits than merits. Use synonyms
Public
often argued that Correct article usage
The Public
favoring
other Change the spelling
favouring
regions
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regions'
region's
food
might cause Use synonyms
people
to forget about their Use synonyms
tradition
and heritage. To illustrate, individuals must be proud of their Fix the agreement mistake
traditions
country
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country's
food
and keep cooking their Use synonyms
tradional
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traditional
food
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, if society keeps Linking Words
to eat
other urban Change the verb form
eating
areas
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areas'
area's
food
, it might lead them to forget about the recipe of their own country Use synonyms
food
. Use synonyms
For example
, a prestigious journal article published that 40% of Linking Words
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citizens have lost the method of cooking their own Change the capitalization
Saudi
tradional
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traditional
food
because of Use synonyms
favoring
other Change the spelling
favouring
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cuisines
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cuisines'
cuisine's
food
. Use synonyms
Thus
, it becomes apparent that addicting other Linking Words
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cuisines
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cuisines'
cuisine's
food
can be deleterious to Use synonyms
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people
traditions and heritages.
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people's
On
conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance, Change preposition
In
however
, I believe that Linking Words
prefering
traditional Correct your spelling
preferring
food
is better than eating other Use synonyms
cuisines
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food
. Use synonyms
This
is because of the fact that individuals must keep their traditional Linking Words
food
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heritages
and Fix the agreement mistake
heritage
also
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teach
generation
to cook it.Fix the agreement mistake
generations
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