People getting addicted to other region food rather than local food. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of it.

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of cultural

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mysticism

is debatable. As result,

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become

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more interested in other urban

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food

instead

of loving their traditional

food

. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will examine both views and I will show my point of view. There are

people

who argue that the benefits of citizens

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preferring

other

countries

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food

considerably outweigh it

is disadvantages

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. The main reason for believing

this

is that consuming other

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food

might be more beneficial for the public.

For instance

, eating

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food

that reaches with spices and vegetables can be

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healthier for

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society. To illustrate, most urban

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food

contained nutrients and vitamins which could aid

people

to be more healthy and fit. Indeed,

this

makes it clear that intaking other

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food

might have

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tremendous well-being for

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society.

On the other hand

, others believe that getting addicted to other

cuisines

food

may have certain demerits than merits.

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often argued that

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other

regions

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food

might cause

people

to forget about their

tradition

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and heritage. To illustrate, individuals must be proud of their

country

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food

and keep cooking their

tradional

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traditional

food

.

Therefore

, if society keeps

to eat

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other urban

areas

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food

, it might lead them to forget about the recipe of their own country

food

.

For example

, a prestigious journal article published that 40% of

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citizens have lost the method of cooking their own

tradional

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traditional

food

because of

favoring

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other

cuisines

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food

.

Thus

, it becomes apparent that addicting other

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food

can be deleterious to

people

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traditions and heritages.

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conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I believe that

prefering

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preferring

traditional

food

is better than eating other

cuisines

food

.

This

is because of the fact that individuals must keep their traditional

food

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and

also

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other

generation

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to cook it.