Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. Therefore, it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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According to

some, it is unnecessary to update

news

in newspapers or television programs because it has no involvement in people’s lives. To a certain extent, I disagree with

this

point of view and

this

essay will give

further

explanations. On the one hand, there are some relatively useless genres of

news

but the public is paying too much attention to them.

Firstly

, the media reports a tremendous amount of information on celebrities on a daily basis in order to meet the demands of many young people, even when the

news

is worthless. In fact, many adolescents are intrigued by the scandal of a rap star or the marriage of two famous singers

whereas

it has no connection with their lives and evidently makes no benefit to them.

Secondly

, there is more and more bad

news

with sensational titles and controversial content that have no other aim than to attract views.

For example

, it might be entertaining to read or watch the

news

about a jealous assault in public but

it is clear that

this

sort of information has no value.

On the other hand

, the public can take significant advantage of

news

in many respects. First of all, people can broaden their general knowledge by watching or reading reliable sources of

news

. As society continuously evolves, so does humanity's knowledge;

therefore

, without reading or watching the

news

, the understanding of the public will be out of date and insufficient.

In addition

, several

news

have practical benefits and relate directly to the public.

For example

, some health bulletins give important information about the location of dengue fever outbreaks

as well as

viable protection from mosquitoes so that the residents can be aware of the threat they are facing in order to make appropriate preparations. In conclusion,

although

many young people nowadays are focusing on redundant

news

about celebrities or sensational stories,

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believe that there are certainly numerous

news

that are helpful and closely related to the public.

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