The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
The chart shows the development trends of international
students
studying in Australia from four Asian countries
.
Overall
18 years, from 1982 to 2000, the sum of overseas students
increased by the year. But the increase is not the same in Malaysia, Indonesia, Hong Kong, and Singapore.
Looking at the details. From 1982 to 1990, the largest proportion of Australian students
in the four countries
is Malaysia. Since 1990, the situation has changed. First rapidly growing Hong Kong overtook Malaysia and maintained first place over 3 years, then
Indonesia caught up and maintained the largest number until 2000. Singapore maintained steady growth in the number of international students
between 1982 and 2000. In contrast
, from 1997 to 2000, the other three countries
had an obvious decline and then
rebounded. In 2000, the total number of international students
from the four countries
is around 20k. It is about double 10 years ago.Submitted by shjwudp on
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