Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to study for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the recent years, some of the university students believe that they need to learn other subjects parallel to their own course. Whilst, some of the students argue that they should only concentrate on only one branch to qualify themselves. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and try to draw a conclusion

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stating my own view. Looking at the first group, being professional in three or four subjects is necessary in

this

era. What I mean, is you need to

be multitask

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and know different things to cope with every situation.

For instance

, thousands of people in Iran go to university to

finally

graduate with a degree in engineering and work with their knowledge. If these guys

also

know some economic lessons, they can invest their salary and make more money. By increasing their wages, they can easily achieve their dreams.

On the other hand

, some of the students claim that they should only study what the university presents. Generally, they think if they only focus on one topic, they will be more successful in their career. Take medical doctors as an example. If a doctor

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most of his or her time during the day, he or she can diagnose more accurately during their work life. All things considered, nowadays companies and organisations need qualified workers to provide better services to society. In my opinion,

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companies employ

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who are more

experted

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expert

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in their job, people who have learned other topics as well, can be more successful in their lives.