Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Smith, I am so glad to give you a proper suggestion to visit countryside places as I
also
visited
last
year and I enjoyed it. I hope summer is a fantastic time to have a wonderful tour of Gekseong province far from Seoul as
this
area is famous for different types of adventure activities. The best thing is the wide variety of houses, apartments, private rooms and penthouses owned by the government and there are no subsidise charges for foreigners.
Additionally
, you can choose whatever you want without paying extra money and you are living here as a temporary person you would easily obtain
a
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discounted prices on traditional things.
Besides
perfect accommodation, you could
also
see the flow of the rivers with the staining mountains. As I told you before on a skype call, there are some special offers and you must try them like adventure activities
such
as sky diving, mountain climbing, trekking and many more at extremely low prices.
Hence
, it is the best way to visit the country and of
course
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you will enjoy it. I can't wait to see you
then
All the best, Khawar Islam
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • peak season
  • off-peak season
  • temperate climate
  • festival
  • cultural events
  • hotel
  • guesthouse
  • vacation rental
  • landmarks
  • natural beauty
  • local cuisine
  • historic sites
  • museums
  • itinerary
  • must-visit
  • scenic
  • breathtaking
  • thriving
  • vibrant
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