Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease . To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the authority should put more concentration on getting rid of environmental pollution and household problems to help prevent an adverse impact. I completely agree with

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statement. First of all, pollution is one of the biggest topics that we face today, the majority of the pollutants may be

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several factors causing pollution

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combustion from human activity

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as deforestation causing more dust and the increasing number of vehicles on the road in daily lives.

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, the menace

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life on the planet that many countries in the world

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as India, China and Thailand have experienced is Toxic gases which causes

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plenty of illness

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as allergies, dermatitis and respiratory diseases which lead to lung cancer.

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, many

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researchers study a paper showing that it

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to almost a million stillbirths in pregnant women.

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, these toxic gases are too grave a concern to be tackled by a handful of

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citizen and the government. The government should play an important role in a public campaign for reducing

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combustion and plastic

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by making strategies persuading people to be aware of the negative effect unless they keep destroying the environment.

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, the workable solution is promoting the citizen to use the sky train

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is the most popular public

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. Most of all, campaigning people to pay attention to protect themselves from these particulate matters is the best way. The warning from the ministry of public health about how to prevent illness by wearing masks and avoiding going outside should be effortlessly reached by the public.

To conclude

, The responsibility surely seems to be tilting towards the actions of not only individuals but

also

the authority.