the maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today

the maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today
The maps illustrate various changes that the
town
centre has undergone from 1990 until now. Generally, it is clearly seen that the
town
witnessed
a
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significant modernization. Most outstanding is the taking part in
of
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human activities. in the west of the
town
,the rubbish bin has shown no changes in terms of both of its locations and square, but two lines had been built in Smith Street in order to limit the length of it. Moving to the top of the
map
,
while
4 old buildings in 1990 had been merged into a shopping mall to satisfy people's demand, the childcare centre still kept intact. The middle building in the
map
remain
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unchanged after the period shown. Looking at the bottom of the
map
, the houses have been destroyed to make room for
apartment
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block
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, the same trend can be seen in the corner of the
map
. There are more pedestrian
way
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have
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been constructed to be more eco-friendly to the
enviroment
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environment
. In the east of the
town
center
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, the cafe has been built to replace the bank.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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