The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below illustrate the route to the main hospital at the city

center

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centre

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during the years

of

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2007 to 2010.

Overall

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, the car parking of the staff and the public used to be together.

However

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, in 2010 the staff park was separated from the public parking.

Also

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, there is

number

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a number

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of

roundabout

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roundabouts

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built to ensure that

the

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access to the hospital will be smoother. The hospital location is around the ring road and it

still

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in the same place in 2010. In instant, the combined car parking was in the southeast

the

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hospital.

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, in 2010 staff parking was

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movied

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moved

to a new place

were

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it had built on the right side of the city road.

In addition

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, in 2007 there was only one road that take you to the entrance of the hospital but in 2010 two

roundabout

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roundabouts

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had been built and connected with a new bus station.

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,

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the but stop had been demolished.