The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below illustrate the route to the main hospital at the city
center
during the years Change the spelling
centre
of
2007 to 2010.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the car parking of the staff and the public used to be together. However
, in 2010 the staff park was separated from the public parking. Also
, there is number
of Change the article
a number
the number
roundabout
built to ensure that Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
the
access to the hospital will be smoother.
The hospital location is around the ring road and it Correct article usage
apply
still
in the same place in 2010. In instant, the combined car parking was in the southeast Add a missing verb
was still
the
hospital. Change preposition
of the
In contrast
, in 2010 staff parking was was
Remove the redundancy
apply
movied
to a new place Correct your spelling
moved
were
it had built on the right side of the city road. Change the verb form
was
In addition
, in 2007 there was only one road that take you to the entrance of the hospital but in 2010 two roundabout
had been built and connected with a new bus station. Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
While
,
the but stop had been demolished.Remove the comma
apply
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