The two maps show a park in 2010 and in present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the changes in ''Grande

Park

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''. The first map describes an overview of the year 1920 and the second one is related to today.

Initially

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, the garden is between Eldon Street, which is located in the South, and Arnold Street, which is placed in the North. In 1920, the

park

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had a fountain in the middle of the area.

However

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, now, the fountain was removed and a rose garden, which is surrounded by

seats

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, was structured. In the west part, an amphitheatre is built

instead

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of a stage and

also

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, and

seats

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are removed. In the same place, in 1920, there were two rose gardens in both the north and south parts of the garden. Whilst, the bottom one is destructured, the upper one remains the same.

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, neither the north

seats

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nor the south ones existed anymore. To the east part of the

park

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, the pond and the rose greenhouse no more existed. There are a cafe and a play area for children are built.

Moreover

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, there is a water feature link to those places.

In addition

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, the east

seats

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are destructured and an entrance underground

park

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is placed.

To sum up

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, the

park

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was totally changed from 1920 to now on.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, seats with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

205 words

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