The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period

The given table provides data about the number of

visitors

to Ashdown

Museum

in the aspects before and after its renovation,

while

pie charts illustrate the satisfaction of the users under 5 levels.

Overall

, the total number of people who visited the

museum

increased significantly.

In addition

, user satisfaction has

also

rose

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significantly after the refurbishment. During the year before

renovation

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of the

museum

, only 74,000 people visited and after the

changes

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it

was climb

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to 92,000.

Moreover

, these changes affected to reduce 40% of dissatisfied

visitors

to 15%.

Furthermore

, people who satisfied with the previous look of the

Museum

were accounted for 30%, but

this

increased by 10% after the refurbishment.

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,

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satisfied customer base climbed from 15% to 35%

due to

the renovation of the Ashdown

Museum

.

Also

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very dissatisfied

visitors

reduced from 10% to 5%.

Finally

,

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both times 5% of the total

visitors

did not

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the survey.