The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
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The line chart given illustrates the number of people in the United Kingdom contacting a tourism desk in various ways over a half-year period. From an
overall
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perspective, there was an increasing trend of asking for information by telephone call and through direct conversation,
while
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communicating through email for the same purpose has become less popular. In January, there were only approximately 450 questions about tourism directly asked in the United Kingdom. The number
then
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started to rise significantly and
finally
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reached its highest point of roughly 1900 requests
at the end
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of the period.
Moreover
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, there is
also
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a noticeable growth in the amount of information asked via telephone.
Initially
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, there were 900 requests at the beginning of the period.
Then
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, the amount had slightly fallen and plateaued before it began to rise again in April and hit its peak of 1600 requests.
On the other hand
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, the number of questions asked through letters and emails underwent a downward trend as the figure dropped from around 750 to 350 in six months.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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