You don’t need a teacher to learn English. All you need are a dictionary and a grammar book. Do you agree with this? If not give reasons. If you agree give reasons.

In
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world is crucial to be able to speak
English
, but, is it possible to learn it on your own? In my opinion, nowadays there are loads of resources to help through your study,
such
as videos and courses, that made becoming almost as good as a native speaker only using books easy. I believe that with a good amount of
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everyone is able to learn
English
from scratch not needing a tutor.
First,
on the
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it is possible to find videos that, watching them not only topics that were not explained clearly in books get more accessible, but
also
listening skills are
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improved
improving
. Albeit, it is easy to look for people that share the interest
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learning
this
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, with whom is possible to practice speaking.
For example
,
while
I was getting ready to take the IELTS test I joined multiple online film discussion groups, so, I could get better at holding
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and
find
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out new things about something I love. A second way, to increase your
English
skills is to travel. Travelling I was able to learn the language in a
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different method, in fact, by going abroad I was able to understand how much easier it is to accomplish the goal,
due to
the need to use the
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for
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life needs.
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, going groceries shopping made
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how helpful was the
vocaboulary
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vocabulary
read in the books and
also
helped me to find a method to apply to real necessities . In conclusion, I think that it might be easier to work with a teacher helping, even though, with
enogh
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enough
effort
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everybody is able to get good at
English
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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