Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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In present times, an extensive variety of
music
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exists in the world
such
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as jazz and classical. It can be useful in numerous ways
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as meditation, therapy and hobby.
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, it can calm someone down
as well as
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energise someone. On the one hand, local
music
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is essential as it represents our culture and traditions. Every region has its own form of
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that is
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created using the local instruments available.
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, we should preserve our culture
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strive hard to keep it alive.
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, in
India
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,India
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classical
music
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uses instruments
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as veena and sitar
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in the western
parts
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violin is used. There are
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some dance forms that are performed on local folk songs which should
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be taught to new generations. I believe,
on the other hand
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, international
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that is
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played in other parts of the globe is
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important as it is
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of their ways of life. It helps us to stay connected with people and understand their traditions.
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, we must always be ready to learn and accept new things. There is nothing wrong if we feel relaxed and peaceful by listening to international
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.
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, kids living in India are learning how to play jazz
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and are really good at it. It
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keeps them happy and motivated.
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, all forms of
music
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are melodious in their own way. It has the power to unite people. We must preserve our regional heritage
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learn the newly invented forms.
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