Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, youngsters are increasingly using technological gadgets more frequently and

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a long period. I opine

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trend has both pros and cons that affect the early development of human beings.

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suggestions for future generations. On the one hand, digital gadgets have many beneficial effects, not only for

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private and public

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educational

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development of kids. Most

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information

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is easily accessed

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smartphones

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children can use their abundant time to learn

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issues or follow their dream at

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very early age.

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is evidenced by a growing number of young hot accouters from TikTok, a digital social

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short videos. For

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, kids can make thousands of dollars via a few trending videos.

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, the positive effects would

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are put under

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of adults.

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hours of using smartphones would be detrimental to health, especially children. They could easily have vision diseases, particularly short sight at very early ages.

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addiction is one of the common issues that prevent kids from outdoor activities. As the matter of fact, parental generations often complain about how different

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activities between their time and now.

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, social media and

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internets

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contains

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lots of toxic information.

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could affect children's mental health and their

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their lack of necessary life skills. For

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, dark webs, a kind of website

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contains

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extremely harmful content, are an increasing emersion in their number

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its

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toxic level. In conclusion, allowing youngsters

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electrical devices

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do more harm than good. In my opinion,

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of

smartphones

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usage must be set under the appropriate amount of time and

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supervisions

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