Some people think that advertisements are good for the society whereas others oppose this view. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
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life
has been much affected by Use synonyms
advertisement
. Many Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
people
hold a strong belief that Use synonyms
ads
are good for society but others believe that advertisements will badly affect human Use synonyms
life
. Regarding that, both notions Use synonyms
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the writer
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On the one hand, there is a benefit of Linking Words
ads
for society Use synonyms
such
as giving more Linking Words
option
. Ubiquitously appeared by some vendors, Fix the agreement mistake
options
ads
will offer various products for consumers and Use synonyms
people
can opt Use synonyms
whether
the best goods to fulfill their needs. Change preposition
for
In addition
, Linking Words
ads
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also
take a main role in local economic stability. paying taxes to a country, Linking Words
ads
may contribute to Use synonyms
develop
economics in countries.
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development
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, there are Linking Words
also
some drawbacks Linking Words
of
having a lot of Change preposition
to
ads
in our societies Use synonyms
such
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apply
human
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with human
life
. because of its rampant existence, Use synonyms
ads
may disturb Use synonyms
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people
activity. To illustrate, so Change noun form
people's
much
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many
people
to become more consumptive Use synonyms
with
buying more tertiary goods. Another main reason why Change preposition
by
people
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life
is not appropriate for a certain group of age. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
For instance
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countries
country
there are a lot of cigarette Add a comma
country,
ads
, that Use synonyms
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not relevant for some Correct your spelling
is
group
of age like children. Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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condition may trigger children to try Linking Words
cigarette
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cigarettes
thus
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by a plethora of Add a missing verb
being surrounded
ads
may Use synonyms
also
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bring
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have
negative
impact Correct article usage
a negative
to
some Change preposition
on
people
.
In conclusion, having many Use synonyms
ads
in society might be positive because it can help Use synonyms
people
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to
choose the most featured product and contribute to the countries’ taxes. Fix the infinitive
apply
However
, the negative effect is Linking Words
also
harmful, Linking Words
such
as triggering Linking Words
people
to live more consumptive and children to consume Use synonyms
product
that they should not consume.Fix the agreement mistake
products
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