Some people think that advertisements are good for the society whereas others oppose this view. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, it is undoubtedly true that human
life
has been much affected by advertisement
. Many Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
people
hold a strong belief that ads
are good for society but others believe that advertisements will badly affect human life
. Regarding that, both notions as well as
Correct article usage
the writer
writer
opinion will be explained in Change noun form
writer's
this
essay.
On the one hand, there is a benefit of ads
for society such
as giving more option
. Ubiquitously appeared by some vendors, Fix the agreement mistake
options
ads
will offer various products for consumers and people
can opt whether
the best goods to fulfill their needs. Change preposition
for
In addition
, ads
also
take a main role in local economic stability. paying taxes to a country, ads
may contribute to develop
economics in countries.
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development
On the other hand
, there are also
some drawbacks of
having a lot of Change preposition
to
ads
in our societies such
as,
interfering Remove the comma
apply
human
Change preposition
with human
life
. because of its rampant existence, ads
may disturb people
activity. To illustrate, so Change noun form
people's
much
options may lead Change the quantifier
many
people
to become more consumptive with
buying more tertiary goods. Another main reason why Change preposition
by
people
disturb people
’s life
is not appropriate for a certain group of age. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
For instance
, in some Fix the agreement mistake
countries
country
there are a lot of cigarette Add a comma
country,
ads
, that this
in
not relevant for some Correct your spelling
is
group
of age like children. Fix the agreement mistake
groups
This
condition may trigger children to try cigarette
. Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
thus
, surrounded
by a plethora of Add a missing verb
being surrounded
ads
may also
bring
Verb problem
have
negative
impact Correct article usage
a negative
to
some Change preposition
on
people
.
In conclusion, having many ads
in society might be positive because it can help people
to
choose the most featured product and contribute to the countries’ taxes. Fix the infinitive
apply
However
, the negative effect is also
harmful, such
as triggering people
to live more consumptive and children to consume product
that they should not consume.Fix the agreement mistake
products
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