The pursuit of wealth has become the main motivation for many business owners nowadays. Do you thinks this is a positive or negative development ?

Nowadays, becoming rich is the dream of numerous people. It is

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the main purpose for humans who own

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enterprise.In my opinion,

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think it may have negative impacts on

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development. On the one hand, they can contribute to the

growth

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economic

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of their country and create jobs for others.

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the fact that the people who own a company always want to maximize their profits with

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little cost,

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they need to improve worker productivity and decrease redundant parts of

company

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.

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, when their company wants to extend their business size,

owner

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the owner

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has to recruit more

staffs

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,

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lead

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to

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the declines

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declines

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unemployment rate in their country.

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, Viettel is a well-known group in Vietnam,

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group not only has significantly

contribute

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around 1 billion dollars per

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year to

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government's budget

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but

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creates about 100000

job

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jobs

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for Vietnamese.

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, if their main purpose

is only earn

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is only to earn

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money as much as they can,

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motivation causes plenty

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harmful issues

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as unfair competition or financial cheating.

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with, unfair competition may help owner earns more profits without tax or responsibility for their products.

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, good companies can not grow,

goverment

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government

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deal with budget shortage

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they do not have enough finance to invest

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projects.

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,

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group is a good example

for

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of

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issue, they steadily cheat on financial

report

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and

stock

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this

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action causes investors

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not

trust

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stock

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market and Vietnam's financial background.

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,

drawbacks

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of

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motivation

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bigger than its positive. First of all, starting a business must follow commercial rules, after that they can think about

maximize

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benefits.