Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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been brought into focus is the place for working and studying of youths and adults. Many

people

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argue

that

work

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and

study

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at

home

is

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so convenient thanks to

the

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modern technology. In my view, I totally agree with

this

notion and

this

is a positive development. In

this

essay, I will discuss the advantages that think action can bring. There is no denying that working from

home

can towards a more modern world. Obviously, the environment can become less polluted

due to

the

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in the number of transports when

people

staying

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at

home

,

this

is

also

responsible for reducing traffic congestion at peak hours. Nothing could be more obvious than the evidence that the streets and environment may become fresher when the number of

people

travelling around

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decrease

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. Another special consideration

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this

case is that working from

home

can contribute to

save

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people

's time and effort when travelling to

works

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work

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.

Instead

of going far

form

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from

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home

to

work

or study, they can save their time and spend it with their families,

suchs

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such

as

hold

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family gatherings. Take Germany as an example, numerous

of

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jobs do not require

staffs

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staff

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go

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to the company, they just

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at

home

and do their own

misson

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mission

.

In addition

, several teenagers have become freelancers because of its benefits, especially working from

home

. In conclusion,

therefore

, working

ans

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and

study

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at

home

may bring a number of benefits to

the

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society in general and to the citizens

in particular

. In my opinion, the

govenrment

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government

should encourage

people

to

work

at

home

instead

of travelling to

work

for those reasons.