The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two maps illustrate the Caribbean island before and after the development of a new ,adventure company to facilitate tourists with restaurants and a beach.

To begin

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with, the 100-meter island was a deserted land with few trees on it but after ,redevelopment it can be that a pier was built to land boats and a vehicle track connected it with the reception block followed by a restaurant.

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, on the left and right side of the reception several housing facilities have been built, a larger one in the middle of the map and a smaller one on the far-left side with trees in the centre. Accommodations have been connected via a footpath for visitors. The beach has now been used by tourists for swimming. The other noticeable feature is that plants and trees were not cut down to build these constructions.

Overall

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, several amenities have been built for tourists for their enjoyment without harming nature.

Moreover

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, a footpath and vehicle tracks have been constructed for visitors to walk around easily and for connecting buildings.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

175 words

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