Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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internet boom
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is official. It can prevent the
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fake news
while
the opponents argue that social forums
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more convenient. In my view, checking
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on
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online platforms
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the press. On the one hand, checking
news
on online platforms
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only convenient
,
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but
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. Recently people cheek
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current affairs on their phones, it is more convenient than the traditional ways, even you can check it anytime or anywhere,
in particular
, you can check the sudden
news
on your phone but not
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.
Moreover
, you can check different types of
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like sports coverage, art coverage or tabloids. Some may argue that those are the fake
news
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on the phone, but not entirely. There are still many official
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on media platforms.
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BBC
news
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official account on Youtube
also
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translation channel for different
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country
.
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, there
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stricter censorship on Youtube to prevent
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fake
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, people won't get
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message easily.
As a result
, current affairs can be provided clearly on
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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