The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
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The line graph compares the average
temperatures
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for
London
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, New
York
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and
Sydney
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. The table gives information on the amount of daylight per year in these three cities.
It is clear that
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London
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and New
York
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have higher
temperatures
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in June, July and August compared to the same period in
Sydney
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. New
York
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has by far the largest number of
sunshine
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hours
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of these three cities.
According to
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the line graph, from January to around mid-April and from October to December,
Sydney
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has higher
temperatures
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than the other two cities mentioned above, averaging over 20 degrees Celsius. During the same period,
temperatures
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in
London
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and New
York
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are relatively lower.
However
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, especially from June to August,
London
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and New
York
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become warmer and they can reach peak
temperatures
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in July of about 22 and 30 degrees Celsius respectively. Looking at the annual
sunshine
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hours
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table, in New
York
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there are a total of 2535
hours
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of
sunshine
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a year, followed by
Sydney
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with close figures.
London
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,
on the other hand
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, has just over 1000
hours
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of
sunshine
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures, london, york, sydney, sunshine, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • annual sunshine hours
  • temperature fluctuation
  • degrees Celsius/Fahrenheit
  • climatic patterns
  • geographical location
  • seasonal variation
  • meteorological data
  • inhabitants' lifestyle
  • tourism industry
  • seasonal activities
  • thermal comfort
  • climate zone
  • sunlight exposure
  • weather trends
  • correlation
  • biodiversity
  • eco-system
  • temperate climate
  • tropical climate
  • desert climate
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