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Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Modification plays quite an essential role in society in
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 it is believed by some individuals that beauty should be considered most important in the case of the design of
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 but others think that aspects of the structure are more arduous.
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 my perspective in subsequent paragraphs. To inaugurate with the view of
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 who says towns should be attractive only. In some
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, the population is very less
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 the maintenance of the
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. Meanwhile,
people
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 always want to live in attractive places.
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 property rates are good in these types of places yet
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 prefer to buy beautiful houses where they have satisfaction. To exemplify it, their famous
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 named Delhi in India where only 30% of
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 prefer to have their own house and 70% of
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 live only for work and do not like to buy houses because of pollution and fewer choices in building structures.
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 side, some
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 want to have more facilities in
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 because everything is necessary for every town
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 as hospitals, schools, playgrounds, grocery stores, food courts, entertainment sources etcetera.
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, it develops the demand of every
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 in society and makes it convenient for
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 to have access to everything at any time.
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, some
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 have to rush from one
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 to another if they have a medical emergency during the night which is a big issue.
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it is clear that
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 every
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 should be built in
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 a way that there is everything available. In a nutshell, some
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 like the beauty of
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 and others prefer functions. I personally believe that both are important in a
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 as beauty would have no benefits without specialities and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Cultural heritage
  • Infrastructure
  • Urban planning
  • Sustainable development
  • Psychological well-being
  • Economic growth
  • Tourism industry
  • Architectural marvels
  • Public spaces
  • Accessibility
  • Environmental impact
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial hubs
  • Green spaces
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