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Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Modification plays quite an essential role in society in
this
 competitive era
while
 it is believed by some individuals that beauty should be considered most important in the case of the design of
cities
 but others think that aspects of the structure are more arduous.
This
 essay will delve into both points of view
along with
 my perspective in subsequent paragraphs. To inaugurate with the view of
people
 who says towns should be attractive only. In some
cities
, the population is very less
due to
 the maintenance of the
city
. Meanwhile,
people
 always want to live in attractive places.
Although
 property rates are good in these types of places yet
people
 prefer to buy beautiful houses where they have satisfaction. To exemplify it, their famous
city
 named Delhi in India where only 30% of
people
 prefer to have their own house and 70% of
people
 live only for work and do not like to buy houses because of pollution and fewer choices in building structures.
On the contrary
 side, some
people
 want to have more facilities in
cities
 because everything is necessary for every town
such
 as hospitals, schools, playgrounds, grocery stores, food courts, entertainment sources etcetera.
However
, it develops the demand of every
city
 in society and makes it convenient for
people
 to have access to everything at any time.
For instance
, some
people
 have to rush from one
city
 to another if they have a medical emergency during the night which is a big issue.
Hence
,
it is clear that
 every
city
 should be built in
such
 a way that there is everything available. In a nutshell, some
people
 like the beauty of
cities
 and others prefer functions. I personally believe that both are important in a
city
 as beauty would have no benefits without specialities and
people
also
 consider looks in
this
 era.
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  • Aesthetic appeal
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  • Urban planning
  • Sustainable development
  • Psychological well-being
  • Economic growth
  • Tourism industry
  • Architectural marvels
  • Public spaces
  • Accessibility
  • Environmental impact
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial hubs
  • Green spaces
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