In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Technology is growing very fast
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recent years. Many things
such
as reading have been facilitated greatly with the use of
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. In
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I will address my opinion about if printed books and newspapers going to be replaced
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online
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Reading is
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habit for most people and it is necessary
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like for students.
However
,
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these days are tending toward searching and learning online by using different websites which facilitate the information to the researcher or
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wants
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to get information easily.
Moreover
, some readers need just to find
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topic not
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whole
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book just to get what they want
this
method can waste both
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online books and newspapers will take the place of printed materials.
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few
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drawbacks regarding online reading.
Firstly
, some people like to touch and feel the paper
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is how they are encouraged to read and online tools are boring for them.
secondly
, using iPad, laptop or even mobile for a long period of
time
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affect their eyes because of the emissions and blue lights
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produced by
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of devices.
Nevertheless
, companies are competing to cope with the future and they are figuring
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solution
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to solve these issues.
Finally
, I think even those who don’t like using technology
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will used to it with
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because one day they will not find printed materials.
To conclude
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nowadays makes everything easy, no need to buy in order to learn or to read and I
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believe
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that one day there will be no place for real papers and everything will be online and by using handheld devices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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