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Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #robots #human’s #future #development #effects #society
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robots
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people
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 future life,
whereas
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 think they are
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hindrance
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 and only
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 detrimental effects on the community. It seems there are some arguments on both
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 as we will discuss in the essay. On one hand, there are various benefits of developing
robots
.
Firstly
, they can greatly help to make some errands quicker than humans. A good example of these
are
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 robot vacuum cleaner. Who can keep a wide floor area clean with just a button control from
a mobile phones
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and
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it
also
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 and can change
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 position.
Secondly
,
robots
 can
also
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this
jobs
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 can be
burden
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 to a real
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 health and risk of
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problem
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 if
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 to be done. Unlike
robots
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 they can
be
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mechanically able to do
specific
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job
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 to
its
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 full potential.
Lastly
, artificial
intelegence
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intelligence
 will never complain at all, so
maybe
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 beneficial in some ways.
Coversely
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, it appears
thats
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that
 there might
some
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 dangerous and negative effects in
the
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society. One major drawback of
this
 artificial intelligence is the possibility of employees
to be
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 redundant and
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 by
robots
. The effect of
this
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 their families especially if they are the
bread winner
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, they made need to retrain to do
an
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alternative
works
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.
Another
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 cons are they might be expensive, so not everybody can able to purchase
this
technolgy
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technology
 and can be a chance to attract theft and other malicious activity like hacking the machine.
Lastly
, it can make
human
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 race redundant. In
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summary
summarry
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, it appears that there are various benefits to human development,
however
, it should
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how
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 to tackle all the possible drawbacks of
robots
 in our society
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Automation
  • Technological advancements
  • Workforce displacement
  • Ethical considerations
  • Innovation
  • Labor market
  • Safety protocols
  • Machine learning
  • Human-robot interaction
  • Economic impact
  • Job creation
  • Cybersecurity
  • Autonomous
  • Precision
  • Dependency
  • Regulation
  • Risk assessment
  • Adaptation
  • Unemployment
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