The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates how to manufacture instant
noodles
.
The production involves a number of stages. To begin
with, flour is delivered by a truck and kept in storage silos. Then
water and oil are added with flour into the mixer. After that, the mixture is passed by rollers and becomes dough sheets. Next,
the dough is cut into strips. Noodles
discs would be prepared before it is cooked with oil and drying. After
this
, the cooked noodles
are placed in the cups
that add vegetables and spices. The cooked noodles
are placed in the cups
adding added vegetables and spices inside. The last
step, labelling and sealing the cups
.
After
this
, the cooked noodles
are placed in the cups
that add vegetables and spicesOverall, the process begins with flour, then
undergoes several stages like mixing, rolling and cooking, and end-up
with sealing and labelling. Correct your spelling
end up
That is
the way of making cup noodles
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