In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
It is widely recognized that protecting the environment should be
top
of the government’s agenda. Correct article usage
the top
However
, much has been debated over how to do this
. One school of thought holds that the most effective way to tackle environmental issues is to raise the cost of fuels
. Fix the agreement mistake
fuel
While
acknowledging the reasons behind this
thinking, I would argue increasing fuel prices is not the best method.
Perhaps for many, charging higher fuel prices seems optimal as most people are responsive to price changes. What they have not taken into consideration is that, as a countermeasure, those price-sensitive consumers may simply switch to more affordable substitutes. There is no guarantee that these substitutes are more environmentally-friendly
in any way. Correct your spelling
environmentally friendly
For instance
, when the price of fuels surges, consumers may be tempted to purchase an electric vehicle rather than a gas-powered one. Though these vehicles are believed to carry “zero emissions” badges, this
claim is not quite true. Battery-electric cars may emit no greenhouse gases from their tailpipes, but their manufacturing process is more carbon-intensive, and how to dispose of used batteries without causing damage to the environment still presents a huge challenge.
In addition
, there remain alternatives to raising prices which might act as better measures. One is for the government to limit the use of private means of transport and encourage that of public ones through policies. This
can be seen in Singapore, where car numbers have frozen since 2018 in tandem with billions of dollars spent in
planned public transport investments. With fewer cars allowed on the roads, the country has seen less pollution Change preposition
on
for
fossil Change preposition
from
fuel burning
engines, Add a hyphen
fuel-burning
along with
the avoidance of environmentally harmful gridlock.
To summarize, while
there are justifications for advocating an increase in the cost of fuels, I would contend that these reasons are short-sighted, as people might turn to substitutes that are no less environmentally harmful and there exist better measures.Submitted by nttung.182 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite