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The financial
crisis
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of 2007–08,
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called the subprime mortgage
crisis
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, was a
crisis
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that started in 2007 impacting the world. Since 1929 when the Great Depression began, the economy began to have the worst downturn,
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this
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had crashed in asset values into a "sub-prime
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" in the US. A cause of the
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was when poor credit people received home loans from part banks
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was a big mistake given that
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caused prices to fall for houses in the US,
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, it had to be renamed home loan debts for "collateralized debt obligations", people were forced to go to more loans to cover these debts but were worst because now their economy and their ownership were at risk. The collapse of the financial institutions begins and an inevitable generalized global
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,
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the government wanted to maintain confidence,
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did not work and a global recession occurred where the economists did not agree;
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was not a surprise to anyone, generating internal conflicts in the state and creating a divided political systems
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