Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same place or area. However, others prefer to live in many different areas over their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's world, moving to a different city or a completely different nation has become very feasible and affordable than what it used to be. For many
people
in society, it is a dream to explore the world while
some want to live their whole lives in the same place they were born in. I will discuss both views in this
essay and present my opinion.
On one
hand, there is a huge number of people
who are not happy with the career and/or educational opportunities
available in their place. Such
people
want to relocate to a different location to have better growth opportunities
. For example
, many students and workers relocate from developing nations to developed nations, for better opportunities
. Such
folks usually relocate multiple times until they find the one
place perfect for them.
On the other hand
, there are wealthy families who have everything they need right in their region. For such
people
going to a different residence altogether would be more challenging. For example
, people
belonging to a family running a healthy business would hardly relocate to new places for new opportunities
. Wealthy families can easily get what they want in their region, so it doesn't makes sense for them to relocate for a better future.
Finally
, as I have discussed, one
prefers to live in many different areas depending upon the financial conditions of one
's family. If one
belongs to a wealthy family, there are fewer chances of them relocating to different areas, and if one
belongs to a regular family, there are more chances.Submitted by kunwar81145vats on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite