The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The provided line graph illustrates the yearly
consumption
of three fast food types ( pizza , fish
and chips
,hamburgers
) in Australia between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, pizza and hamburger consumption
increased dramatically throughout the period, whereas
fish
and chips
consumption
declined significantly. Besides
, the favourite fast food was hamburgers
during the last
few years.
To begin
with, fish
and chips
dishes were eaten 100 times
per year in 1975 and it reduced to around 85 in 1980. In the following year, the figures rose back to roughly 90 before experiencing a drop in the next few years.Furthermore
, fish
and chips
consumption
reached its lowest of closer to 40 times
in 2000.
On the other hand
, teenagers 8 hamburgers
less than 20 times
per year, but increased the figures to approximately 85 times
. Moreover
, the popularity of hamburgers
continued to grow and reached a maximum of 100 in 1995 and remain the same till 2000. Similarly
, the growth of pizza buyers inclined gradually in the first 10 years (1975- 1985), from around 10 times
to 30 times
. Then
gradually incremented and accountant for 85 in 1995. Finally
, that number did not change for the next half-decade.Submitted by dmdeemanthakasun on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, hamburgers, times with synonyms.
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