The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The provided line graph illustrates the yearly
consumption
of three fast food types ( pizza ,
fish
and
chips
,
hamburgers
) in Australia between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, pizza and hamburger
consumption
increased dramatically throughout the period,
whereas
fish
and
chips
consumption
declined significantly.
Besides
, the favourite fast food was
hamburgers
during the
last
few years.
To begin
with,
fish
and
chips
dishes were eaten 100
times
per year in 1975 and it reduced to around 85 in 1980. In the following year, the figures rose back to roughly 90 before experiencing a drop in the next few years.
Furthermore
,
fish
and
chips
consumption
reached its lowest of closer to 40
times
in 2000.
On the other hand
, teenagers 8
hamburgers
less than 20
times
per year, but increased the figures to approximately 85
times
.
Moreover
, the popularity of
hamburgers
continued to grow and reached a maximum of 100 in 1995 and remain the same till 2000.
Similarly
, the growth of pizza buyers inclined gradually in the first 10 years (1975- 1985), from around 10
times
to 30
times
.
Then
gradually incremented and accountant for 85 in 1995.
Finally
, that number did not change for the next half-decade.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, hamburgers, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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