The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The provided line graph illustrates the yearly
consumption
of three fast food types ( pizza , Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
,Use synonyms
hamburgers
) in Australia between 1975 and 2000.
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Overall
, pizza and hamburger Linking Words
consumption
increased dramatically throughout the period, Use synonyms
whereas
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fish
and Use synonyms
chips
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consumption
declined significantly. Use synonyms
Besides
, the favourite fast food was Linking Words
hamburgers
during the Use synonyms
last
few years.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
dishes were eaten 100 Use synonyms
times
per year in 1975 and it reduced to around 85 in 1980. In the following year, the figures rose back to roughly 90 before experiencing a drop in the next few years.Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
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consumption
reached its lowest of closer to 40 Use synonyms
times
in 2000.
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On the other hand
, teenagers 8 Linking Words
hamburgers
less than 20 Use synonyms
times
per year, but increased the figures to approximately 85 Use synonyms
times
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the popularity of Linking Words
hamburgers
continued to grow and reached a maximum of 100 in 1995 and remain the same till 2000. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the growth of pizza buyers inclined gradually in the first 10 years (1975- 1985), from around 10 Linking Words
times
to 30 Use synonyms
times
. Use synonyms
Then
gradually incremented and accountant for 85 in 1995. Linking Words
Finally
, that number did not change for the next half-decade.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, hamburgers, times with synonyms.
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