Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if the wish. Discus both these views and give your opinion.
In my point of view, working in a
country
where professionals held their training should be mandated. They can work in another country
after imparting the knowledge and ability to which they had their training.
Firstly
, here in our country
which is the Philippines is in need of allied healthcare professionals such
as doctors, nurses and medical technologists. Also
other professions like engineers and teachers. An individual who finished his degree and training here should work first in our country
. Because of the inevitable
rising Change the word
inevitably
number of
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apply
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the population
population
the government cannot suffice the need of each member of the community. A person can show his love for the Add a comma
,population
country
by offering the abilities for a year or two.
Secondly
, people are not prohibited to work in another country
. Because I believe every person should have the right to freely decide for themselves. Besides
, there a various reasons why an individual decides to migrate to another country
. For instance
, working abroad can also
help them increase their knowledge and expertise. In addition
to that migrating to another countries
is their stepping stone to reaching their dreams. It will Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
also
help them develop themselves personally and professionally.
In conclusion, there is no right or wrong about this
given topic. Thus
, every decision has an equivalent effect. Well, mainly because of the lucrative income another country
can offer to a professional that their own country
cannot sustain. Especially nowadays, most of the merchandise in the marketplace is too expensive. Even people with a job is
thriving. Because of the need to be able to survive with an advanced quality of life.Correct subject-verb agreement
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