Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the numbers of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

children have been told by the adults in their

life

that they can do anything in their

life

if they work hard

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will

elaburate

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elaborate

more about the cons and

pors

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pros

of

this

notion and give

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examples.

To begin

, the advantages of

this

idea it has several of them but the most two that I would like to talk about

is

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Firstly

,it gives them the motivation ,which is nessecery to be

seccess

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success

in

life

.

for example

, if a child

told

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is told

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in school ,that

ha

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he

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can pass the exam if he studies hard

then

he will do it ,and will make a high mark.

Secondly

, it

promots

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promotes

their

self-confident

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self-confidence

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and confident

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confident

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confidence

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to achieve

any thing

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anything

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in

life

whereas

children

raised

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on

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ideas that only rich people or highly

conected

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connected

can make success stories.these kids will have no

confident

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confidence

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in

themselfs

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themselves

where

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and

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they will tend to be shy and

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chalked

personality

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personalities

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.

However

, in the matter of

disadvantages

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these words can

also

couse

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cause

some damage to their personality.for

instant

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an instant

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, if a child couldn't make a

god

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good

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job with some activities, because of things

that

is

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out of his

countrol

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control

.

Then

he will be

debress

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debris

depress

since he had been told that

any one

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anyone

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can do

any thing

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anything

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if he worked hard.

to conclude

. children should be

tought

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taught

tough

to understand

this

notion in more detail as it may go wrong in some parts of

life

.

additionally

. as humans are weak ,and we

cann't

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can't

countrol

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control

or fight bad things happen and

its

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okay , but what is not ok is to stop

tring

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trying

to make your pest. so they should

told

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tell

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that

this

notion is correct

,

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if we

keept

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kept

keep

tring

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trying

and did not stop improving

ourself

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ourselves

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if we

felled

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fell

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.