Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the enviroment. What can governments do to address this problems? What can individual people do?

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All society is responsible for different environmental problems. To prevent damage to the environment and problems with our well-being we can take some measures related to our surroundings.

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, the highest bad impact on our environment is air pollution. Air pollution mainly appears because of gas emissions which have a negative influence on the air. Gas emissions arise from car motions, fabrics and waste of plastics. These gases are not only the cause of global warming but

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harmful to our health.To prevent it, individuals should take responsibility for their actions and choices.

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we can buy reusable baskets for shopping and use them to prevent packaging waste and waste of products. The second one is we should buy more products in glassware to use it multiply. The third is to take public buses

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of buying own car, shrinking the number of cars will

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help to reduce congestion in the cities.

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,governments should be responsible no less than people. They should exert more effort to protect the surroundings, and put more trash bins on the streets which are divided into 3 sections

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as glass, plastic, and paper to make it easier for both society and recycling. Meanwhile, they should move fabrics overseas where people are not living as much as possible because fabrics have a large bad effect on people's well-being. Another option can be planting trees and plants which absorb carbon dioxide and produce oxygen, to help to be better to climate and ecosystem as well. In conclusion,

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actions are harmful to our environment. Individuals and governments can prevent global warming with their actions which I noticed above.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the enviroment. What can governments do to address this problems? What can individual people do?

Your opinion

As a result of electronic invention such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent so you agree or disagree?

The advance in air travel are focused only in first-class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You are employed full-time and also doing a part-time evening course. You are not able to continue the course. Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter • explain why you cannot continue the course • describe the situation • say what you will be doing about it

Youth unemployment is increasing in many countries in the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it?