The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future  

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the proposed changes to an industrial
area
, which will be transformed into a housing
area
in the future.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
area
will be dramatically modified with the addition of several offices, bedroom houses and parking. Turning to the west of the industrial zone, we can see that a three bedrooms house and a four bedrooms house are planned, replacing the location of the packing and storage section.
Furthermore
, the entrance and reception are projected to be demolished to make way for 3 houses that have 2 bedrooms in the North. Communal gardens will be constructed under these houses. Meanwhile, the factory which is situated in the North of the industrial
area
was knocked down to give way to the parking
area
and apartments.
In addition
, the parking garages will appear to the South of the residential
area
in the future,
while
6 offices and a canteen are removed.
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