Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema other says to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema.

In the hectic ,lifestyle we need more relaxation in our routine .Most of them preferred to watch
movies
because it is reducing their stress.Nowadays digital growth is
highly
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compared to past decades, and it’s easy to watch
movies
anywhere. Digital decades easy to burn our stress anywhere. we saw
movies
on our phones or tablets we will repeat the lovable scene anytime in the
movie
but the
theatre
is not allowed to repeat the scene in our priority.
Last
week we saw a
movie
in the
theatre
which is located near our home.we have thoroughly enjoyed the
movie
,but the fight scenes are extraordinary at that
time
we all felt one more . On the one hand, many people enjoy watching
movies
in the
theatre
.Phones and tablets don’t give a better sound experience
while
watching a
movie
.the particular sound system in the
theatre
will clearly hear exact sounds.yesterday I saw a
movie
online .It’s a horror
movie
that
time
I missed the thrill experience why because
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darkness of the room and exact volumes will peak our thrill experience.,
usually
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we would like to eat snacks during our
movie
time
, the outer side will get more items after that sometimes
crowd
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makes us feel happy . In ,
conclusion
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the conclusion
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I argue better to watch
movies
in the
theatre
.
It's always give
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a
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pleasure to watch crowds.nowadays we are busy we don’t
tohave
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to have
have
spend
time
with our family or friends .
theatre
is always used
to
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the
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happy gatherings.
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  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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