The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.

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The diagram depicts information about the number of parcels delivered by the two different companies from 1920 to 2000.

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TNT

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mail

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service

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gradually increased and reached peak status and the

FedEx

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service

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starting phase was sharply high and slow down after that fluctuating.

Firstly

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, In 1920 most of the couriers were delivered by

FedEx

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compared to

TNT

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, which is 15000

moreover

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two times higher than

TNT

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.After the decade

TNT

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was slightly higher but

FedEx

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gradually increased which is more than 15,000. In 1940

FedEx

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reached approximately 24000 and

this

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is the highest period in the given digraph

and

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apply

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the following decade

deeply fallen

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fell

has deeply fallen

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the

service

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rate which below 15000 .

Service

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rate stable from 1950 to 1960 , after that

this

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mail

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service

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gradually increased their

service

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which is more than 15000 in 2000.

TNT

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mail

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service

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gently increased from 1940 to 1960 after that slightly down in the following decade

moreover

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it was going to peak from 1980 to 1990 .In 2000

this

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mail

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service

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reached nearly 25000 . In Conclusion,

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we have seen the diagraphic information and it shows that

TNT

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couriers lead the highest number of services.

keyarthiFri Feb 17 2023

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, overall".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tnt, mail, service, fedex with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

190 words

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The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.

**Some people believe that schools should focus more on teaching practical skills that can help students to secure a job. Others argue that schools should focus on academic subjects that provide a foundation for higher education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.**

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that we sould replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people say that living in a high-rise apartment block is a lonely experience because there is no community spirit. Others say that people who live in high-rise apartments have a much better sense of community than those live in houses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them.Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them.discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that schools should focus more on teaching practical skills that can help students to secure a job. Others argue that schools should focus on academic subjects that provide a foundation for higher education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.