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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

#work #street #noise #complaint #council
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to explain my dissatisfaction
about
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 street ground workings near my home. I am Orhan Canakci and I am living
in
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17705 street in the East of London. I have several problems
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 these studies in my street. First of all, particularly, your teams work only
weekends
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 because,
in
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 weekdays, they cause traffic congestion. I strongly believe that
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 it is not
reasonable
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 explanation. Second of all,
while
 they working, I can not rest my home because your teams use lots of
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 to break ground.
As a result
 of
this
 situation, I am very upset
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 on weekends.
On the other hand
, If you would accept my possible solution for
this
 issue, I would be very
appreaciate
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appreciative
. The first solution is that
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 your teams might work
in
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 weekdays because most
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people
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the people
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 had gone to their company during
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your
working
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.
Moreover
, your
employeers
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employees
 may finish
this
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 studies as early as possible. Please accept
this
 letter and solve my big problem. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Orhan Çanakçı
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