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The crime rates nowadays are decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

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, I do
agree
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 thanks to our modern
technology
 that made it easier to catch a thief or any
crime
 maker and in
this
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the
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essay I'll dig into more information.
moreover
.nowadays,crimes are much less than that in the past now we have cameras everywhere and a lot of policemen everywhere in the cities. even if a
crime
 took a place with advanced
technology
 it'll be easier to catch them,
technology
 has significantly reduced
crime
 rates. The advancement of machinery can be a threat to society. Nowadays, the internet is the most convenient and easiest accessible source of information for almost everything. The information can be processed through the internet within a fraction of a second.
Nevertheless
, many people inappropriately use
this
 mechanization. A significant amount of personal data is available not only in social media accounts but
also
 on net banking which can be easily hacked by professional hackers.
For instance
, the study shows that 80 % of the cybercrime reported in North America are hacked net banking accounts of customers who have lost millions of dollars just in a couple of seconds.
However
, as
such
 criminal opportunities arise, so developers are combating (fighting against)
this
 threat with security software. In conclusion, the advancement of machinery has reduced the
crime
 rate in some areas as compared to the past.
However
, new criminal activities have emerged
due to
 the misuse of
technology
.
Therefore
, it is hard to say whether it has reduced or not, but it has definitely changed in nature.
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