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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In the present world, cars have become a necessity than a luxury. Having an international no-driving
day
 may seem like a positive way to reduce atmospheric exploitation but it might hamper the community more than actually bring a positive change. I will discuss both sides and opine my views as to why
this
 will not be effective in the near future. On one hand, transit machines contribute towards a major portion of atmosphere abuse. Planning an international no-driving
day
 would have a major impact on decreasing atmosphere abuse.
For instance
, in developed countries like America and Canada, where every household has at least two vehicles, one
day
 of zero driving would heavily impact air deterioration. Stopping all transit in
such
 countries will have a great impact on improving the breathable air.
On the other hand
, with the help of growing technology, electric transportation means have become a reality now. These transit machines contribute nothing towards atmospheric abuse.
For instance
, many nations have planned to completely end the use of non-electric vehicles in the next five to ten years. Implementing an international no-driving
day
 will have a very minute effect in the immediate future. So, spending manpower and resources on
such
 a thing might be futile.
Also
, planning
such
 a holiday will be a major headache for the official agencies, as they would have to allow all emergency services, so it does not seem feasible to achieve.
Finally
, celebrating an international no-driving
day
 might look like an effective idea today, but it will become useless in the near future
due to
 the world developing transport means that produce almost zero air pollutants. Once the majority of society has shifted towards electric or similar transportation means, the expenses of planning an international no-vehicle
day
 would exponentially become higher than the positive effect it produces on the environment
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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