You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to

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Dear Sir, I am currently studying at your college in Computer science. I am writing to request you to change my course to another course as it is just my first semester and some of the subjects that I am doing are relatable to my desired line so the change will not be a problem. Because I have been less interested in programming and coding since high school,

therefore

, it is a daunting task for me to achieve success in these studies that I am not keen on. Apart from that, I have been trying but unable to get

along with

my classmates as we have different paths to follow. Eventually, I would like to change my program to Associate of Science as I completed non-medical with flying colours during high school.

This

is something that will bring me success and I would be able to fulfil my future goals. I shall be very thankful for your consideration Yours faithfully Dilpreet

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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