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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that it is a prostive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both the sides of the argument and give your own opinion.

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In today's world,
computers
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 have become a necessity. The use of
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 in
education
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 is increasing rapidly. Some folks believe it is having a good
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 on society
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negative feedback on it. I will discuss both sides of the statement and give my opinion. On one hand,
computers
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 have made learning and
education
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 easier with the help of visual aids. Explaining concepts to young scholars has become trouble-free with the help of animations and recordings of real-life examples.
Computers
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 have
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 helped
education
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 reach places where folks cannot transit to educational institutes.
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, in recent years, when schools were shut down
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 the pandemic,
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 were the only source that helped students continue their studies.
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, the increase in the use of
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 in the
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 industry has led to kids having fewer emotions. The lack of human interaction from a young age is making it challenging to develop young generations emotionally.
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, the younger generations prefer staying home and playing on
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 rather than playing outside with actual humans.
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 behaviour
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 confirms why the youth wants to spend more time indoors than outdoors.
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 might lead to major psychological diseases in society.
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, as we discussed,
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 do have a positive
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 in reaching the areas and communities which lack educational institutes, but they
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 have a negative
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 on young folks by keeping them away from human interactions. In my opinion, the positive
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 of
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 heavily overshadows the negatives, and
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 their use should even be increased in the educational system.
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