You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree? You should write at least 254 words.

A huge percentage of the population argues that

media

coverage of popular folks has an adverse influence on children. Social

media

has a lot of

potential

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potentials

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to create an impact on the young generation. In my opinion, it has a positive effect on the youth. The primary reason is that it helps to inculcate good qualities in kids

such

as determination, leadership and integrity.

Besides

, children not only look up to famous personalities but

also

try to be like them.

As a result

, they end up developing similar traits.

For instance

, Dhoni has exceptional leadership qualities and is very calm under stressful situations and his followers try to copy his behaviour and eventually develop those qualities. These days, the young generation has a very sedentary lifestyle and celebrities have influenced them to follow a healthy diet

as well as

to lead a disciplined life.

In addition

,

achievements

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the achievements

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of these famous figures are known to all

due to

the

media

. Some of them came from very poor families and went on to achieve great things

as a result

of their determination. They followed their passion and never gave up.

This

never

give

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up attitude is very essential these days as the youth gets demotivated very easily.

For example

, famous cricketers like Sachin and Dhoni came from very middle-class families but they worked extremely hard to achieve their goals.

To conclude

,

media

if used in a constructive way can help

the

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society in many ways. Celebrities have a great influence on the young ones and we should use it to our advantage.