Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think it is negative for children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the proliferation of the Internet. More and more
children
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advertisement
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appear,
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advertisement
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are disadvantageous to
children
.The essay will analyze the advantages and disadvantages of
this
phenomenon respectively
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and
finally
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draw a conclusion. Advertising aimed at
children
has three advantages ,through
advertisement
,
people
can learn a lot about the brands ,which is
a
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good for some parents who have no experience in buying. Promoting commencing purchases through publicity, give
the
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great push to economic growth. Flowing the technical innovation. Some are good for
children
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study equipment are appeared.
People
can understand it
with
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television
advertisement
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.
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,
some
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fundamental theories and
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the ability of comprehension and analysis
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,
people
can learn by themselves, with the learning machine advertised, it can make our understanding easier. But, the
children
's
advertisement
is
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double-edged
shord
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short
,
people
don't know about the products before
buy
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through
advertisement
, may his
behavior
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can pose a threat to
you
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money. There is a high probability that the product you bought is
of
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defective guilty and
that is
a fraud! So
people
must careful not to believe
advertisement
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. Because there's so
uncertain
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in
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the Internet, it's the same with gambling. In the end,
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advertising aimed at
children
has both
advantage
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advantages
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and disadvantages but
is
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advantages are more prominent.
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the same time,
people
also
have to analyze the
true
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and false with
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advertisement
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, don't blindly believe!
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