Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and community services should be a part of

school

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curriculum

,

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because in

most

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a most

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situation

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this

will benefit society and youth. I strongly agree that

this

practice provides not only

to

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the development of the psychological and emotional resilience of children, but

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also

will help

for

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their future career opportunities.

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with, one of the best ways to increase significant

socially

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skills

such

as communication, teamwork, self-discipline, and responsibility

are

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through community

services

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. Participating in volunteering and charity

works

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also

helps young people to develop their self-confidence.

For instance

,

due to

some research and statistics voluntary activities at high

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schools

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promote reducing social exclusion of students and improve

psychological

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the psychological

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atmosphere at school. On the other side, volunteering promotes the development of professional skills

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the pupil

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pupil

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pupils

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which can be beneficial for their future career. The reason for

this

is that voluntary

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are the best way to gain the necessary experiences in different fields and

choice

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further

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path for

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a student’s

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student’s

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students’

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career

evelopment

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development

. Providing extensive training,

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volunteers

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work allows lots of

practicing

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such

as solving

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the problem

a problem

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problem

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problems

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in real life, networking, and teamwork.

For instance

, many companies and organizations invite students to undergo internships to see

working

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atmosphere and

fell

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feel

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like a part of

team

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a team

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.

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internships often turn into

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permanent job

offer

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. In conclusion, I am convinced that community

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should be a part of

the

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education at schools

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because it will help students learn things that they would not learn from teachers. It will

also

help to hone

professionally

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skills and bring lots of benefits to society.